Chapter 12 Journal

My reaction to the end of the novel, Lord of the Flies by: William Golding was I believe Ralph cried at the end because he was extremely happy that after losing hope of ever being rescued they finally are. Ralph was also crying because the boys did not get to kill him or harm him in any way. I have gained great hatred towards Jack and Roger! I absolutely despise them because they have killed Simon, and Piggy. Piggy did not deserve to die nor did Simon! I would absolutely recommend this novel to a fellow friend because I feel it brings great aspects of human nature and what atrocious acts we are capable of.

Questions

1. Ralph decides that they must attempt to get back Piggy's glasses to make fire and ask Jack why he simply didn't ask for it.

2. In what ways are the twins "seeing Ralph for the first time" before going to Castle Rock?
Samneric wondrously examine Ralph and they realize that he is slowly but surely losing his civilization and the reason for the fire.

3. Why is the boy's attempt to get back Piggy's specs and get the other boys to maintain a signal fire bound to fail?
The boy's attempt to get back Piggy's specs and get the other boys to maintain a signal fire bound to fail because the boys have hope that if they reacquire the specs and maintain the fire again they will get rescued.

4. Why do you think Roger pushes the rock off the cliff?
I think Roger pushed the rock off the cliff to stop the arguing and secretly meant to kill Piggy to get rid of the conch so nobody will be on Ralph's side.

5. How is the destruction of the conch symbolically significant?

The destruction of the conch is symbolically significant because without it there is no order whatsoever, everyone is a savage now.

6. For most of the boys, what are the reasons they want a chief? What does a chief do for them? Most of the boys want a chief to have someone to show them what to do, if they weren't to have one they wouldn't know what to do.

7. What has led you to become so savage to the point where killing someone doesn't matter to you?
Did your parents treat you cruelly so your taking out your anger on others is that why you don't want to be rescued?

8. I liked it here at the beginning I thought we'd be able to stick together and stay sane while the adults rescued us but it's been the complete opposite. Jack hates me and my followers. They have came to the point where they kill without mercy. I'm scared one night they'll come and kill me or anyone that's with me.
   They killed Piggy! The CONCH, PIGGY! They're gone, he's dead! I'm alone, there is no order, they're savages! I'm a savage. How is it possible, I cant believe this is actually happening. I won't be surprised if they kill me now, maybe its for the best.

Ch. 10 Common Core Questions

Ralph, Piggy, and Samneric all describe the night before very differently. Ralph describes the incident as a terrible murder. "Piggy" "That was murder" (Golding 156).  Piggy on the other hand describes the night before as an accident. "It was an accident," said Piggy suddenly, "that's what it was. An accident" (Golding 157).  Samneric don't really know what happened because they left early. "Yes. We were tired," repeated Sam, "so we left early. Was it good ---" (Golding 158).

Ralph describes Simon's death as murder and mentions that perhaps Simon was only pretending to be dead and still might be alive.  "'Piggy.' 'Uh?' 'That was Simon"' (Golding 156).  On the other hand, Jack says that Simon was disguised as the beast and the beast is still somewhere on the boat shaped island. "' The beast, might try to come in. You remember how he crawled. He came disguised. He may come again even though we gave him the head of our kill to eat'" (Golding 160).

With Jack placing an order to have Wilfred beaten, we may say that Jack's power has clouded his mind from simple human morality. "The chief was sitting there, naked to the waist, his face blocked out in white and red. The tribe lay in a semicircle before him. The newly beaten and untied Wilfred was sniffling noisily in the background."  Jack is the sole leader of his tribe, they all obey him due to the terror he bestows upon them. "The semicircle shuddered and muttered in agreement" (Golding 160).

Script:
Piggy: "It's come! gasped Piggy. "It's real!"
Ralph: "Did you get hurt Piggy?"
Sam: "We gave them something to think about"
Eric: "When I woke up one was kicking me in the face. I got an awful bloody face, I think, Ralph. But I did him in the end."
Jack: *walked quietly and stole Piggy's glasses and lead the boys to attack them  
Roger: "Have you found them?" (Follows Jack and attacks other boys)

not the best quality but..

Article Questions

Questions

1.  What does Betsy McCaughey identify as a problem in her commentary?

Betsy McCaughey identifies that the problem is: not protecting the hospitals. They are puting them at risk with the virus Ebola.

2.  What solutions does she offer?

Some solutions she offers are: sending the patients to bio containment facilities  to keep hospitals safe from Ebola. 

3.  How does infection expert Sean Kaufman view the CDC’s guidelines for protective gear in treating Ebola patients?

He believes it is very irresponsible, and dead wrong.

4.  What point did Rep. Michael Burgess make about CDC head Thomas Frieden? 

Rep. Michael Burgess made a point regarding the CDC head Thomas Frieden that with his irresponsibly two people got infected with Ebola. 

5.  Ms. McCaughey concludes her commentary by recommending: “The best Ebola strategy is to protect our local hospitals, health-care workers and patients by relying on the nation’s bio-containment facilities. That’s what they were built for.”

I honestly do agree with the author because we don't have to put other people at risk while there are these clinics where they could be properly cared for.

My parents have the same mentality, they believe people should stop being selfish and simply understand it is in the best interest.

Summary Post

http://www.nbclosangeles.com/news/local/PCH-Closed-in-Malibu-After-Fatal-Crash-291158071.html

ln the news article nbclosangeles.com titled "Woman Killed in Fatal Chain-Reaction Crash Involving Bruce Jenner" the authors Asher Klein and Christina Cocca focus on a four vehicle crash, one being Bruce Jenner's. First, Klein and Cocca explain that an older women in a Lexus died due to her injuries when Bruce Jenner and three other cars collided together. Next, the authors informed that they tested the drivers to confirm that that they were not intoxicated. Also, Klein and Cocca reported that Jenner was supposably being chased by paparazzi, later it was informed that, that was inaccurate. In addition, Jenner was very cooperative and even offered to have his blood tested. Finally Klein and Cocca conclude by stating that further facts will be released later in the evening news.

Knowledge Post

Dictionary Definition: Facts, information, and skills acquired by a person through experience or education; the theoretical or practical understanding of a subject.

My Defintion: Something that you enjoy doing without anyone telling you to do so. The thirst to want to know more, to understand what surrounds you and how it works. 

Outside of school I gain knowledge by surrounding myself with books and poetry. My room is like my chamber of knowledge, I have a library of books ranging from mysteries, biographies, collections of poems, etc. I gain knowledge by enduring each book and what it has to offer. Continuous acquisition of knowledge is important because our earth is changing daily varying from technology, science, our society etc. If we stop acquiring knowledge we would simply become like an outdated book, useless. 

Opinion Editorial

Which is more important: hard work or talent? 

In my opinion I believe talent is more important than hardwork. I believe this because without talent you aren't motivated to work hard. If you really love something you will work hard for it, whatever it is. If you are a hard working person but have no talents you're pretty much bound to something you may not like doing, whereas if you're talented you have something to look forward to everyday, hence why I believe talent is more important than hard work. 

Joy Luck Club Essay

Gonzalez 1

Jazmin Gonzalez

12/14/14

Joy Luck Club Essay

Period 3

“Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal”― Richard Puz.  In the book The Joy Luck Club by Amy Tan, a realistic fiction novel the main characters An-Mei Hsu, Lindo Jong, Ying-Ying, Suyuan Woo, and June differ in their ideas about love and family. Each difference of the generations manifests itself in the way each generation deals with issues such as marriage, divorce, and child rearing.

In the novel, The Joy Luck Club the mothers of the girls have a different perspective on love and family.  The daughters in America are free to do things that their mothers disapprove of.  “More than thirty years later, my mother was still trying to make me listen.  A month after I told her that Ted and I were getting a divorce, I met her at a church, at the funeral of China Mary, a wonderful ninety-two-year-old woman who had played godmother to every child who passed through the doors of the First Chinese Baptist Church”(Tan 187). This quote indicates, that Rose Hsu’s mother highly disapproves of her daughters divorce, the mother believes in always being with her husband, whereas she doesn't she simply isn't happy anymore.  Rose used to believe everything her mother used to tell her but one day she decided not to.

Secondly, Suyuan lost her two twin daughters in China where the city was destroyed by war. “She didn't even pause to think.  She simply said in a way that made it clear there was no more to the story:  “Your father is not my first husband. You are not those babies”’(Tan 26).  This quote shows that Suyuan is still hurt that she lost her her two babies.  Suyuan’s wish is to find her two daughters but her wish is unfulfilled when she commits suicide to liberate her daughter from shame and unhappiness. This shows the love Suyuan has towards her daughter. Adding to that, June is informed by the ladies of the Joy Luck Club where her two sisters are and must follow her mother's will and find her two sisters. June greatly differs her mother because she is stronger than she believes, whereas her mother was weak, filled with superstition and love for her daughter.

The generations differ because the mothers look what is best for their daughters and their family.  “I know now that I had never expected to find Bing, just as I know now I will never find a way to save my marriage. My mother tells me, though, that I should still try”(Tan 130). The daughters on the other hand believe in what is best for them and their happiness. “But if you bend to listen to other people, you will grow crooked and weak”(Tan 108) This quote again shows that the mothers want the best for their daughters.

In Conclusion, the generations have different ideas on love and family. Suyuan shows her love towards her daughter by killing herself to save her daughter from shame and a miserable life. Adding to that, Rose divorces her husband despite what her mother thinks which completely goes against her mothers views. The generations are different because the daughters are more modern than their mothers. The daughters see that men are not superior than them.   

Leopard Man Questions

9. Why is Tom Leppard called "Leopard Man"?

Tom Leoppard is called "Leopard Man" owing to the fact that he is tattooed from head to toe with leopard spots.

10. Why does the author think about people with tattoos and piercings? Why does he have these opinions?

The author finds himself unimpressed with individuals who radically alter their appearance through extreme tattooing, piercings, hair mutilations, etc.  The author thinks such people are desperate for society's attention.   

11.How is Leopard Man different from other tattooed and pierced people?

Leopard Man is different from other tattooed and pierced people because he doesn't live for other people's reactions.  He lives in solitude. 

12. Where does Leopard Man live?

Leopard Man lives in a small cabin in the Scottish wilderness.

13. According to Feys, what kind of people does society fear? Why?

According to Feys, society fears loners. Society fears loners because those mysterious creatures who pursue their own values without seeking others' permission or permitting others to hamper them.

14. What is the "World's most common but dangerous psychological disorder?" Explain Feys argument in this paragraph. 

The world's most common but dangerous psychological disorder is conformity. Feys explains that the consequences of it are no less than the suppression and destruction of one's self.


15. Why is Leopard Man so happy?

Leopard man is happy because he believes he is in paradise, he loves being where he is.

Latin Roots #6

Roots & Derivatives

1. corp(or) (body): corpse, corporation, corps, corpuscle, corpus, corset
2. cred (to believe, to trust): credo, credit, discredit, credence, credentials, accreditation
3. cur(r), curs, course, (to run, to flow): current, excursion, discourse, concur, recourse, curriculum, recurrent
4. dic(t) (to speak, to say): diction, indication, edict, jurisdiction, dictionary, addict, interdiction

Word list

1. benediction, n: the invocation of a divine blessing, as at the close of a religious service; a blessing or state of blessedness

The benediction was so great the mother sacrificed a piece of bread to the birds as a way of thanks. 

2. concourse n, running or flowing together; a broad public walkway or hallway; a crowd or throng 

The concourse was a very uncomfortable place to be because there was always a crowd of people. 

3. concurrent, a: occurring at the same time; meeting or acting together

The meeting was on concurrent with my best friend's birthday. 

4. corporal, a: related to the physical body

The corporal body is considered art to some people such as artists. 

5. corpulent, a: very stout; fleshy and obese; fat

The American woman was very corpulent due to the fact she are alot of fast food. 

6. credibility, n: the quality of being believable or trustworthy

The company had credibility of making aliens from scratch. 

7. credulity, n: the (native) willingness to believe too easily without proof

The young woman's credulity was ridiculous because she believed a company made aliens from scratch. 

8. cursory, a: done in a superficial or hasty manner

The car engine was cursory. 

9. dictum, n: an authoritative saying or maxim

The dictum of the president of the United States was not questioned. 

10. incorporate, v: to form into one body or functioning unit; to combine several different things into a whole

The diva incorporated her mothers sayings in her songs, they became very famous. 

11. incredulous, a: not believing, skeptical, or doubting

The actor was incredulous while acting. 

12. indicative, a: characteristic of or very much like; suggestive

The indicative of being mad didn't seem to catch the eyes of the husband. 

Greek Drama Questions

1. What kind of prize is given for dancing choruses or warshipers?

A bull or goat is prized for dancing choruses or warshipers. 

2. How many spectators would gather in the open-air theatre of Dionysos? 

About fourteen thousand spectators gathered in the open-air Theater of Dionysos. 

3. How does the mask affect the voices of the actors?

The masks affect the voices if the actors voices because these masks had exaggerated mouthpieces that amplified the actors' voices.

4. Why was Antigone suspenseful to viewing audiences? 

Antigone was suspendful to audiences because suspense came from their knowledge of things the characters on stage did not know. 

5. How is the shepherd to leave the infant on the mountainside? 

The shepherd is to leave the infant to die on a lonely mountainside with his ankles pinned together. 

6. What is the riddle the Sphinx gave to Oedipus?

The riddle the Sphinx gave to Oedipus went like this: "What creature goes on four legs in the morning, two legs in the afternoon, and three legs in the evening?"

7. Who are Oedipus's children?

Oedipus's children are Eteocles, Polynices, Antigone, and Ismene. 

8. After Oedipus is exiled, who takes over  Thebes? 

After Oedipus is exiled, Antigone's two brothers agreed to rule in alternate years. 

9. What did the family do to the dead body? 

The family would close the dead person's eyes and mouth and began to prepare the body for the próthesis, the wake.

Antigone One-Page Response

     My brother Eteolces has been called a national hero when in reality he wasn't.  He started the fight between him and Polynieces.  My uncle has sent people to go bury my brother Eteolces but has instructed that my brother Polynieces be deposited at the city dump as bird and maggot meal.  I highly disagree with my uncle and I will do something about it.  At first I went to my sister for help but she is too afraid of our uncle to help me do anything.

     I have a detailed plan of what I plan to do to have my brother's body buried.  I plan to poison my uncle Creon, and therefore be able to bury my brother Ploynieces.  The reason why I incline to such drastic measures is because with my uncle alive I will probably be caught and killed.  I plan to honor my brother's death so I immediately go to a witch and buy poison.  The witch guarantees that the poison is very potent and will immediately take it's effect.  I creep to the kitchen and put the poison in the drinking water. 

     A couple hours later my uncle shows up at the kitchen and drinks water.  He immediately starts tumbling and falls to the floor.  At midnight I try burying my brother Polynieces the best I could without being seen by the guards.  After I have succeeded in burying my brother I run to the house.  I was successful. The next morning the guards show up looking for my uncle but I say he has passed on to the other life and that I am in charge now.  I have gotten away with burning my beloved brother Polynieces. 

Jonathan Safran Foer Webinar

     Today, October 28, 2014, we had a webinar meeting with the famous author Jonathan Safran Foer.  Foer has written many novels including Tree of Codes, Everything is Illuminated, and Joe.  The webinar we had today with Foer he talked about his most recent work, Eating Animals.  I believe Jonathan Safran Foer's Webinar was educational, persuasive, and intriguing.
     I believe this webinar was educational. This webinar was educational because I learned various new things for example, I learned that eating dogs is legal in forty-four states in the United States.  Not only did I just learn that, but I also learned that eating meat has negative effects on our bodies. A stand out moment from the video that I thought was educational was the fact that all the farmers he met said the same thing, "If there was something I would not eat it would be hot-dogs."  I chose this standout moment because I feel like that says a lot about the type of meat being used to make the hot-dogs.
     In addition, I believe the webinar was persuasive because Foer was giving his outlook on the topic.  "Thinking about dogs, and their relationships to the animals we eat, is one way of looking askance and making something invisible visible."  Thus, Foer kept mentioning dogs to try to persuade us that eating animals is not okay. All animals are equal but society has morphed that truth.  Another standout moment from the video was the fact that Foer has beliefs but doesn't care if people choose to be ignorant and eat meat.  This stood out to me because it shows a lot about Foer's personality.
     Lastly, I found the webinar to be intriguing due to the fact that like Foer said, "Meat is murder." I find this quote to be indeed correct, we are murdering animals in such cruel ways. Again like Foer mentioned animals aren't able to roam anymore, they are kept in crammed cages where they cant even move. In addition, a standout moment in the video was when Colbert got bacon out and started eating it in front of Foer.  Foer didn't care because Colbert was aware of what he was eating.
     I believe this presentation relates to my personal life because like Foer I have always believed something should be done to change peoples perspective on eating meat.  I personally have been a vegetarian because I thought it was the only thing I could do to at least contribute to the cause.  I was only a vegetarian for four months but now that this topic has rose to my conscience again I think I'm going to react on it again.

Latin Roots #5

Roots and Derivatives

1. cent(i) (hundred): century, centipede, centigrade, centimeter

2. cid(e), cis(e) (cut, kill): homicide, incision, suicide, scissors, circumcise

3. clam, claim (cry out, declare): clamor, exclaim, proclaim, disclaim

4. cord, cour (heart): accord, courage, encouraged, cordiform, cordate

Word List 

1. bicentennial a, n: (related to) a celebration of a two hundredth anniversary; a, happening once in a period of two hundred years or lasting two hundred years

Last week was Walt Disney's bicentennial of creating Disney World.

The white comet only passes every bicentennial which is unfortunate to people who want to witness one. 

2. centenarian n: a person who has lived to be one hundred years old

My great grandma will become a centenarian in two days. 

3. centurion n, a: a Roman officer commanding one hundred men; a, related to the military mind, especially as it favors military solutions for handling social problems

A Roman officer commanded a centurion of men.

4. clamorous a: characterized by continuous loud and complaining voices; noisily complaining; insistent

The students in Calculus were clamorous when the teacher stated that there would be a test the following day.

5. concise a: covering much in few words; brief and to the point

My chemistry teacher was concise about how he wanted the project due next month. 

6. concordance n: a condition of harmony or agreement; an alphabetical index indicating reference passages, as from a writers works

The mother and father of the child were in concordance that she needed extra help in math class. 

7. cordial a: of the heart; warm and friendly; amiabled

The teenager had a cordial personality. 

8. discordant a: (sounding) harsh or inharmonious; clashing

The band was discordant the king was disatesfiesd.

9. genocide n: the systematic extermination of an ethnic group

Hitler planned a fen oxide against the Jews. 

10. incisive a: keenly penetrating; cutting into

The sergon was incisive of the woman's body. 

11. proclamation n: an official statement or announcement that informs or honors

The kings proclamation was that everyone must give his 20% of thier earnings to him. 

12. reclaim v: to claim again; to restore to former importance or usefulness  

The teenager reclaimed that she did not plagiarize.  

Creativity

I really like this picture, and since Robin was my favorite actor I just wanted to put him on my blog. 

Literature Analysis #2: The Color Purple

Part 1: 

     In the novel, The Color Purple, a realistic fiction novel by Alice Walker, the book starts with Celie's father rapping her.  Celie never tells her mother, but eventually she starts to get "big" and her mother asks her who the father is.  Celie says the father is God.  Adding to that, after Celie is pregnant a second time, her father gives away her second child again.  Secondly, Celie is married away to a man whom liked her sister, Nettie, but her father let her marry him, but not Nettie.  Celie is then forced to care for his children and him.  Once Celie moved out Nettie ran away from home to go with her.  Albert tried to flirt with Nettie but she ignored him, so he told her she had to go.  Celie is left alone but she tells her sister to write to her, like she writes to god.  

     Celie meets one of Albert's old loves and they become close, that is how she finds out that he has kept Nettie's letters from her.  While Shug is with Celie, Celie feels loved, Shug is always with her and helps her out.  Shug takes Celie with her to Tennessee where she starts her own little business of jeans.  Celie for once feels happy again, while she is there  she no longer writes to god but to Nettie.  Nettie and her actually have conversations now that they receive eachothers letters.  Years later Celie moves back to her house where she meets with her beloved sister and children. 

Part 2:

     The main theme of the novel, The Color Purple by Alice Walker was every race has good and bad in it.  I believe this to be the main theme because all throughout the novel walker describes what blacks do, and whites as well.  For example: "Then he grab hold my titties.  Then he push his thing inside my pussy" (Walker1).  This shows that blacks do horrible things but not just them, every human being does bad in one way or another.  "Then the white merchant began to get together and complain that this store was taking all the black business away from them, and the man's blacksmith shop that he set up behind the store taking some of the white" (Walker181).  This quote shows the bad things that white do, so no matter what race, there is good and bad.

Part 3: 

     The protagonist Celie is a dynamic character because at the beginning of the story she does everything that is said to her and never questions anything.  Towards the end of the novel Celie starts to stand up for herself like Shug does.  Celie is also a round character because her personality changes, she doesn't have the same views she had at the beginning. 

Part 4: 

     One important motif from the novel was the use of letters.  The letters contributed to the work immensely because it is a way of communication.  Celie writes to god at first since she thinks he is the only one who listens, or hopes he listens, but then later on she finds out her sister writes to her and she starts to write to Nettie instead.  The use of the letters show the characters true emotions and show what they may not show to other people.

Part 5: 

     The reason I chose this book was because my friend read it and asked me to read the first page.  I took the book and read the first page and it seemed like a crazy book but it looked so innocent on the cover so I decided to find out myself if it was so crazy as the first page seemed to be. 

Part 6:

     Nettie, the main character's sister I think is like myself.  The reason I think Nettie is like me is because I love learning and don't want to stop.  I believe if I was in Nettie's situation I would have runaway as well to study. 

Part 7: 

     One idea from this novel that I expect to remember for a long time is sexism.  I believe I will remember this for a long time because it comes to show the restrictions there were long ago.  I believe it is important to have a little say in what you want.  "And what was my surprise when a little girl opened the door and she had your eyes set in your face."  I think this was the most interesting quote because I could see Celie even if I had never actually seen her. 

Latin Roots #4

Roots and Derivarives

1. bon. boun (good): bonus, bounty, bountiful, bonify, boon, bon voyage, bonhomie

2. capit, capt (head, chief, leader): capital, captain, capitalize, decapitate, per capita, capitol

3. carn(i) (flesh): carnal, carnality, carnival, carnation, carnify

4. ced(e), ceed, cess (go, yield, surrender): recede, proceed, success, concede, exceed, procession, unprecedented

Word List

1. accession n: the attainment of a certain rank or dignity; an increase by means of something added; the act of becoming joined

December 29 was the day of the poor man's accession to the medium class rank.

2. bona fide a: in good faith; genuine

The teenagers had bona fide that they would last a long time, prior to breaking up.

3. bonanza n: a sudden and unexpected source of money or riches; a wild fall

The peasant walking along the street walked past the president and a bonanza appeared on his hand.  

4. bounteous a: inclined to be generous; plentiful abundant

The fruit garden was filled with pleasant bounteous odors.

5. capitulation n: a surrendering, usually upon prearranged terms or conditions: a final giving up

The soldier's capitulation was a shame because little did he know he was close to defeating the rebels.

6. carnage n: a great slaughter, as in a battle

Although the the soldier surrendered the battle was a great carnage.

7. carnivorous a: a flesh-eating, as an animal

The carnivorous shark attacked the human surfing, and that terrorized the whole city. Nobody dared going to the beach.

8. incarnate a: literally, in the flesh: in bodily form; personified; flesh-colored

The incarnate creature was well known to the museum employees because it terrorized the tourists.

9. intercede v: to act on another's behalf; to meditate

The teenager didn't know whether to intercede or turn around. 

10. precedent n, a: a previous act or decision taken as a valid model; a, having gone before

The judge's precedent didn't make his conscious go wild. 

11. recapitulation n: a brief repetition ; a summary , as of what has already been said

The girl's recapitulation of how she broke up with her boyfriend tore her apart. 

12. reincarnation n: a thing that is reborn, or comes back into being , although perhaps in a different (bodily) form

According to a tale, once you die, if you hated an animal your reincarnation will be of that animal. 

Literature Analysis #1: Crime and Punishment

Briefly summarize the plot of the novel you read according to the elements of plot you've learned in past courses (exposition, inciting incident, etc.).

     In the novel, Crime and Punishment by: Fyodor Dostoyevsky the main character, Raskolnikov a poor student, who lives in St. Petersburg in bad conditions lives in a tiny garret. Raskolnikov is antisocial and is always inside his mind. He had previously given lessons but gave it up since he only made a few coppers a day. Raskolnikov now stayed at his loft and did nothing, for that reason he was in great debt with Alyona Ivanovna, his land lady. Alyona provided him with the garret he lived in, tea, and food. Raskolnikov would sometimes go and pawn some of his things to get some money, Alyona though never gave him the worth of his pawned things. He was in great debt to her, so she would only give him a couple copecks or roubles. Raskolnikov saw Alyona as a witch that intimidated him and decided that he would have to kill her. He decided to go to a bar to drink, there he met Semyon Marmeladov, a broker, Marmeladov drunk told Raskolnikov all about himself and about his misfortunes.
     Days passed and all he thought about was how he would come about to kill Alyona but that night he had a terrible dream of a distant memory of drunken people killing a mare and saw that he had gone mad and abandoned the thought. One day, he decided that he was superior and that he would after all kill Alyona. Raskolnikov planned everything and one night at about 7:30pm, while Alyona's sister Lizvetta was out, he went to pawn an old silver cigarette case. Alyona was examining it giving Raskolnikov her back, and  he used the opportunity and  swayed his axe at her skull and she collapsed on the floor. He searched her and got her keys to some chests and he opened them and found gold jewelry along with other things. While he was searching Lizvetta happened to return and Raskolnikov was forced to kill her too. Raskolnikov manages to escape without being seen. While he escaped he was debating whether he should runaway or go back to his garret. He later decides he will not be caught and returns to his garret. Throughout the rest of the novel Raskolnikov fights whether he should confess to his crime or not and although he doesn't confess to it he is suspected by the police at once.

Succinctly describe the theme of the novel. Avoid cliches (Why did your author choose to write about this topic, person or event?).

     The theme of the novel, Crime and Punishment by: Fyodor Dostoyevsky is detachment from society. I believe this is the theme because throughout the novel Raskolnikov is mentally ill and he is isolated from everyone else. When he kills Alyona and Lizvetta he isolates himself even more from society, by sleeping a lot and simply being in his mind all the time.  In addition one thing that isolates him from everyone else is his remorse.
     Fyodor Dostoyevsky according to the novel Crime and Punishment chose to write about this topic because it was inspired by his own life. Dostoyevsky in order to pay off his debts had to make money so while he was abroad in Europe he wrote Crime and Punishment and it was an instant success.

Why did you choose this book?  What about the book appealed to you the first time it came to your attention (and how did it come to your attention)?  What about the book made you want to keep reading once you began?

     I came to choose Crime and Punishment because my interest has always been Forensics and I felt like I would really enjoy reading this novel. Likewise, the first thing that appealed to me the first time I came across this novel was of course the name because it sounds dramatic and intriguing. Once I started reading the novel I noticed the main character had a lot of internal conflict which I believe is very interesting, and that led me to what to read more and more.

Did you find the book realistic?  Did you make any connections between people/events you read about and people/events in your own life?  Why or (if you didn't) why not?

     I believe the novel is indeed realistic. A connection I made with the novel Crime and Punishment was with the event which not long ago happened, The Isla Vista Shooting. Elliot like Raskolnikov thought he was superior than other people, and it was evident that Elliot was as well mentally ill. In addition, Elliot planned out how he would kill his victims.

Describe the author's tone. Include a minimum of three excerpts that illustrate your point(s).

     The author's tone at the beginning of the novel is emotional because Raskolnikov goes through a lot of emotions trying to decide whether or not he will kill his land lady. Farther into the book the tone changes to tragic when Raskolnikov's conscience starts to make him feel extremely guilty and when he is imprisoned in Siberia. The tone then changes to confession when he lets go of his secret and admits to himself he is in love with Sonia, Marmeladov's daughter.

 Describe a minimum of ten literary elements/techniques (figurative language/symbolism/imagery/ allusions, etc.) you observed that strengthened your understanding of the author's purpose, the text's theme and/or your sense of the tone. For each, please include textual support to help illustrate the point for your readers (include page numbers).

1. Symbolism: "Have you a cross on you? Here, take this one, of cypress wood" (Dostoyevsky 332). The cross symbolizes redemption because once he told Sonia his secret, he didn't feel alone anymore, he felt loved. It symbolizes a new beginning on the right path, he recognizes what he did and realizes it was terribly wrong.
2. Flashback: "'He'll crush her," was shouted round him, "He'll Kill her!" "It's my property," shouted Mikolka and brought the shaft down with a swinging blow" (Dostoyevsky 48). This flashback from his childhood indicates that Raskolnikov at one point of his life was not mentally ill and he thought of murder as a horrible thing. This dream led him to the conclusion that he had gone mad thinking he could actually kill someone but his perception changed shorty.
3. Imagery: "Then a strange idea entered his head; that, perhaps, all his clothes were covered with blood, that, perhaps there were a great many stains, but did not see them, did not notice them because his perceptions were failing, were going to pieces . . . his reason was clouded . . . ." (Dostoyevsky 74). Dostoyevsky uses the imagery of blood in this novel to show Raskolnikov's guilt, and to help the reader imagine the scene clearer.
4. Dramatic Irony: "I . . . I wanted to have the daring . . . and I killed her" (Dostoyevsky 328). This is dramatic irony because all throughout the story since the beginning we knew he killed his landlady and Lizvetta.
5. Metaphor: "'Do you know, Avdotya Romanova, you are awfully like your brother, in everything, indeed!" he blurted out suddenly to his own surprise, but remembering at once what he had just before said of her brother, he turned as red as a crab and was overcome with confusion" (Dostoyevsky 171).
6. Simile: "Had Avdotya Romanova been dressed like a queen, he felt that he would not be afraid of her" (Dostoyevsky 171).
7. Assonance: "I wanted to murder without casuistry, to murder for my own sake, for myself alone" (Dostoyevsky 329).
8. Hyperbole: "'Why had he gone to her to beg for her tears?'" (Dostoyevsky 334)
9. Personification: "There was a breath of fresh air from the window" (Dostoyevsky 335).
10. Repetition: "What you need now is fresh air, fresh air, fresh air!" (Dostoyevsky 361)

Describe two examples of direct characterization and two examples of indirect characterization.  Why does the author use both approaches, and to what end (i.e., what is your lasting impression of the character as a result)?

Direct Characterization: "This was not because he was cowardly and abject, quite the contrary; but for some time past, he had been in an over strained irritable condition, verging on hypochondria. He had become so completely absorbed in himself, and isolated from his fellows that he dreaded meeting, not only his landlady, but anyone at all" (Dostoyevsky 1). This quote shows that Raskolnikov is mentally ill and is not in good conditions. "He does not like showing his feelings and would rather do a cruel thing than open his heart freely" (Dostoyevsky 171). This quote illustrates that Raskolnikov can't trust anyone and you have to really earn his trust.
Indirect Characterization: "As he went out, Raskolnikov had time to put his hand into his pocket, to snatch up the coppers he had received in exchange for his rouble in the tavern and to lay them unnoticed on the window" (Dostoyevsky 21). This shows that Raskolnikov has some good in him and cares about others. "'Enough, enough, Sonia, enough! Let me be!" he cried in a sudden spasm of agony, "let me be!"' (Dostoyevsky 330) This shows that he regrets killing his victims and that he is weak.

 Does the author's syntax and/or diction change when s/he focuses on character?  How?  Example(s)?

 The author's syntax does not change when he focuses on character but definitely changes his diction. For example, "Do you know, Avdotya Romanova, you are awfully like your brother, in everything, indeed!" he blurted out suddenly to his own surprise, but remembering at once what he had just before said of her brother, he turned as red as a crab and was overcome with confusion" (Dostoyevsky 171).

Is the protagonist static or dynamic?  Flat or round?  Explain.

     The protagonist Raskolnikov is a dynamic and round character because all throughout the novel he is changing. In the beginning of the story he is self centered and thinks about himself and what will come to his benefit but as we read farther into the book we notice he needs the help of others to keep him from going mad. Towards the end of the novel he accepts what he did and cares about someone, Sonia, and no longer just himself.

After reading the book did you come away feeling like you'd met a person or read a character?  Analyze one textual example that illustrates your reaction.

     After reading Crime and Punishment by: Fyodor Dostoyevsky I didn't feel like I met any character but rather it was like reading someones diary. While I was reading this novel I felt like the characters were just writing their problems in a book, but I don't feel like I personally met any of them.

ENDURING MEMORY
Write a paragraph in which you describe the one or two ideas from this book that you expect to remember for a long time.  Explain your choices and their importance.  Share a passage or two that give your reader a taste of the same effect.

     One idea that I will without doubt never forget is the subject of mental illness. "There had been little difficulty about his trial. The criminal adhered exactly, firmly, to his statement." (Dostoyevsky 418) I like this quote from the novel because it shows that due to circumstances a crime could be seen in different ways but Raskolnikov knew what he did and did not want pity of any sort, although he is ill he took responsibility to his actions. I feel that just because someone has an illness it doesn't mean they can't take responsibility, they can but maybe just in different measures. Another topic that I found interesting in this novel was poverty. "With my rags I ought to wear a cap, any sort of old pancake, but not this grotesque thing" (Dostoyevsky 3). I fell in love with this quote because it shows that Raskolnikov is aware of his poverty and is not in denial of it, that was one of his motifs to kill his landlady.

     

     

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